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+3Bennett gendeadislove deadred 7 posters |
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Should I continue with my stories? I have a lot more. | Yes | | 100% | [ 7 ] | No | | 0% | [ 0 ] |
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deadred Margie
Posts : 2674 Join date : 2010-01-08 Age : 28 Location : Blairsville
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Mon Mar 08, 2010 4:40 pm | |
| I am still thinking about how far this should go... | |
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gendeadislove Phoebe
Posts : 2096 Join date : 2010-01-17 Age : 30 Location : places.
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Tue Mar 09, 2010 4:05 pm | |
| keep writing it until you just come to a conclusion without even really realizing it until you write it. i other, less confusing words, dont think "how should i end this" just write until it ends itself yeah. cuz that way is so much less confusing. lol | |
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deadred Margie
Posts : 2674 Join date : 2010-01-08 Age : 28 Location : Blairsville
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Tue Mar 09, 2010 4:25 pm | |
| I just hope it doesn't get boring so suddenly. | |
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gendeadislove Phoebe
Posts : 2096 Join date : 2010-01-17 Age : 30 Location : places.
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Tue Mar 09, 2010 4:43 pm | |
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deadred Margie
Posts : 2674 Join date : 2010-01-08 Age : 28 Location : Blairsville
| Subject: Forbidden Rose part 5 Tue Mar 09, 2010 4:51 pm | |
| " I know its you Ash, but what about the whole 'annointed ones' thing? " " I exhist to kill the Nephilim. The Nephilim are angels that fell from heaven. I have been doing this for five hundred years. " I stared ar her. She seemed to be telling the truth, but I had no idea what a nephi...whatever was. There had to be more. " You don't believe me." Another confirmation. " No, I believe you, but I don't know..." " I know." She stared at me and smiled. " Why did you save me." " Didn't you listen to me? Your husband was a nephilim. There originally were two hundred of them. Your husband is the first I have killed. You have benn married for two weeks, right? Well You knew him for two months before you married him. Isn't it knid of weird that he just suddenly appeared? " " Were you stalking me? How do you know my personal business? " " It's my job, I was too late. I couldn't reach her in time..." " Who? " " I should start at the beginning. I will tell you what I have been doing for five hundred years. My purpose. " Azazeal was the leader of the Nephilim. He has been wanting to have a son for a very long time. But I have been able to stop him. Until this time, I was too late. Everytime he found a new, willing whore, I had to stop this from happening. The birth of the child would release the Nephilim. The son would be a messiah. This time, I was too late to stop Raina. Raina found out about the baby and tried to abort it. Azazeal put a stop to that. The doctor took the baby out and it lived. Raina, didn't know. She was only pregnant for a week, yet she looked like she was twenty weeks along. She had no idea. She eventually found out because of the dreams. Raina was a witch. She was after all a decsendant of the Waterford witches. The doctor wouldn't give her answers, but i took care of him and enrolled myself into Waterford Hall. I befriended Raina and her dead friend, Caitlin. Caitlin was ritualistically sacrificed by Azazeal. Raina died because Azazeal convinced her that I was all about the killing and when I was about to dispatch the little bastard into darkness, she got in the way and I accidently killed her instead. Now I have to find the little bastard. " What does that have to do with me? " " You have to help me get to Azazeal. " " I don't want to know. I am going to help you, but how, I will find out later. Its too much for me right now. " " It makes sense you know." " What? " " He's a fallen angel, she was a witch and her best friend is a lesbian ghost." " Life sucks. " | |
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deadred Margie
Posts : 2674 Join date : 2010-01-08 Age : 28 Location : Blairsville
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Tue Mar 09, 2010 4:55 pm | |
| That's your opinion, which I appreciate. | |
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gendeadislove Phoebe
Posts : 2096 Join date : 2010-01-17 Age : 30 Location : places.
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:04 pm | |
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deadred Margie
Posts : 2674 Join date : 2010-01-08 Age : 28 Location : Blairsville
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Tue Mar 09, 2010 5:23 pm | |
| Just posted part 5. + = VICTORIOUS!!! | |
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gendeadislove Phoebe
Posts : 2096 Join date : 2010-01-17 Age : 30 Location : places.
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:23 pm | |
| wow. this is great! cant wait for more!! | |
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deadred Margie
Posts : 2674 Join date : 2010-01-08 Age : 28 Location : Blairsville
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:24 pm | |
| So far you are the only one. | |
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gendeadislove Phoebe
Posts : 2096 Join date : 2010-01-17 Age : 30 Location : places.
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:28 pm | |
| well, hey nothing i write gets a lot of readers. my Gen Dead fanfic on quizilla has like no readers except my friend casey, but i email her a copy. and i think i got one or two ppl on here to read it. i think you said you would. did u ever yet? | |
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deadred Margie
Posts : 2674 Join date : 2010-01-08 Age : 28 Location : Blairsville
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:36 pm | |
| Yes I did. It was very interesting. I got like a mix of emotions going on at the same time. It was like watching a dog walk on its hind legs. | |
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gendeadislove Phoebe
Posts : 2096 Join date : 2010-01-17 Age : 30 Location : places.
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:42 pm | |
| ooookkkkaaayyy. odd. but thanks. i have no clue when the next chapter will be up. im suffering from a crazy life and writer's block. ill tell you when i put it up. if you have any suggestions i have a topic about it on here under fanfictions so put them there. | |
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deadred Margie
Posts : 2674 Join date : 2010-01-08 Age : 28 Location : Blairsville
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:50 pm | |
| I am suffering from serious writers block. I can't stop thinking about school and Luis. Luis=-)...... Okay sorry, now do you have any ideas? At all? Even random things help. Even if they make no sense. | |
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gendeadislove Phoebe
Posts : 2096 Join date : 2010-01-17 Age : 30 Location : places.
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:51 pm | |
| i dont know. my brain has been fried lately with school i cant think of anything creative. | |
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deadred Margie
Posts : 2674 Join date : 2010-01-08 Age : 28 Location : Blairsville
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:55 pm | |
| I am so happy, I am doing better in Biology. But now, we have to breed fruit flies. Luis and I were laughing because Mrs.Colwell was saying that we needed to make sure that the flies were virgins. | |
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gendeadislove Phoebe
Posts : 2096 Join date : 2010-01-17 Age : 30 Location : places.
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:57 pm | |
| nice. we have a lot of dirty jokes in my chem class. like once we had a really easy test and then mr gowisnok said "the next time it will be longer and harder" and half my class errupted in laughte, and i dont think he got it. lol | |
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deadred Margie
Posts : 2674 Join date : 2010-01-08 Age : 28 Location : Blairsville
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:02 pm | |
| This guy in my class, T., he was reading and he was explaing about living things and he was like, " We are all living orgasms." We all burst out laughing. Even Mrs. Colwell. She got high off a marker once. | |
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gendeadislove Phoebe
Posts : 2096 Join date : 2010-01-17 Age : 30 Location : places.
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:03 pm | |
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deadred Margie
Posts : 2674 Join date : 2010-01-08 Age : 28 Location : Blairsville
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:06 pm | |
| Some of the thigs that happen in that school. Too bad you couldn't try one day in my school. | |
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gendeadislove Phoebe
Posts : 2096 Join date : 2010-01-17 Age : 30 Location : places.
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:08 pm | |
| or you one day in mine. or at least my lunch with my friends. wow. we have some odd conversations. | |
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deadred Margie
Posts : 2674 Join date : 2010-01-08 Age : 28 Location : Blairsville
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:12 pm | |
| Well at least you didn't have a guy sitting at your table who put cottage cheese on his hand and pretend it was somehting else. We started freaking out and he just licked it off in a really perverted way. | |
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Bennett Finding out about Julie
Posts : 194 Join date : 2009-07-25 Location : Who knows?
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Thu Mar 11, 2010 7:55 pm | |
| I love your story so far it really good | |
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deadred Margie
Posts : 2674 Join date : 2010-01-08 Age : 28 Location : Blairsville
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Fri Mar 12, 2010 3:30 am | |
| Thank you so much. I just don't know how far I shoud take it. I'm afraid if I make it too long, people will get bored of it. We fear that which we cannot see. | |
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gendeadislove Phoebe
Posts : 2096 Join date : 2010-01-17 Age : 30 Location : places.
| Subject: Re: Forbidden Rose Fri Mar 12, 2010 2:14 pm | |
| i know i wont get bored with it!! | |
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