Poem...... by BRIDGET A.K.A LivingDead_Girl

Life is short
Death can last forever
I thought about death
but this, never

Nobody has read my poem............

I did!

I love the ambiguity created by the last line. I'm ambiguity's biggest fan.

i love short poems that say more than it seems.
it gives you something to think about on those boring days.

and just cause people don't reply, doesn't mean it hasn't been read, or at least that's what I tell myself.

u should add a poll, that way lazy people can tell you what they think, with out having to type.

i luv it. And its so true

your poetry is wayyy better then mine

~Dead~Layla~ wrote:

i luv it. And its so true

your poetry is wayyy better then mine

yours could be better

i only put the first stanza


i don't like the others much

Aw. Very nice poem, dear chocolate friend.

Axel wrote:

Aw. Very nice poem, dear chocolate friend.

thank you!! chocolate.......

i guess i should stick to stories

NIIIICCCEEEE!!! really good poem... too bad it's not one of those boring days!!!

great poem

aw.. pretty . :]

no one has posted in a while WAAAA

i LOVE it!

Awww! Thank you kayla

I don't know anything about poetry, but I like it! It tells a story with only a few lines...

EvilGu wrote:

I don't know anything about poetry, but I like it! It tells a story with only a few lines...

Thank you EvilGu

Hey that rhymes

this is really good. i wish i was able to write poetry. ive tried, but nothing ever works. i guess ill just stick to writing my Gen Dead fanfiction.

Thanks!!!!!!

your welcome!

Do you write?

not poetry. ive tried, but it never works out. i have a Gen Dead fanfiction that im writing and puting on Quizilla called Memoirs of a Zombie. not too many ppl have read it, and i personall dont think its too good, but i try.