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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts : 357
Join date : 2009-03-03
Age : 28
Location : Cali baby!!!
 |  Subject: Tear Drop...a poem  Fri Jun 19, 2009 6:28 pm | |
| Tear Drop
My tears are blue,
Notice the color,
Full of truth to give one another.
My cheeks are red,
Hot as Fire,
I'll never be such a liar.
My body is rigid,
I'm full of hate,
For when you leave,
I cannot wait. | |
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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts : 357
Join date : 2009-03-03
Age : 28
Location : Cali baby!!!
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Fri Jun 19, 2009 6:30 pm | |
| i know it sounds like im...really mad, but truthfully i was in a great mood when i wrote this | |
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undeadgalwithpower99
Hearing about Tommy's Eye
Posts : 20
Join date : 2009-06-07
Location : ohio
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Sat Jun 20, 2009 8:24 am | |
| that was good better then anyother poem i think i have made | |
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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts : 357
Join date : 2009-03-03
Age : 28
Location : Cali baby!!!
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Sat Jun 20, 2009 11:18 am | |
| thanx!  | |
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Xheart_hope2die
Noticing a Living Impaired w/a short skirt
Posts : 29
Join date : 2009-03-03
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Mon Jul 13, 2009 2:41 pm | |
| I like the message. my biggest pet peeve is syllables. but yours weren't off much. I rate it as a BRAVA! congratulations, that is the second highest rating in my case. | |
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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts : 357
Join date : 2009-03-03
Age : 28
Location : Cali baby!!!
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:45 pm | |
| thank you i really appreciate it | |
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x.ZombieOli.x
Standing in front of flying tomatoes
Posts : 660
Join date : 2009-07-30
Location : Vlad Island
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Sat Aug 29, 2009 8:55 pm | |
| Oh Em GEE. that poem is like PRO.!!!  xx | |
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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts : 357
Join date : 2009-03-03
Age : 28
Location : Cali baby!!!
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Wed Oct 21, 2009 7:15 pm | |
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lexylovedead
Traditionally Biotic
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Join date : 2009-11-26
Age : 28
Location : potage the colors r red,black,and white
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Fri Nov 27, 2009 12:55 am | |
| - *Bella Cullen* wrote:
- Tear Drop
My tears are blue,
Notice the color,
Full of truth to give one another.
My cheeks are red,
Hot as Fire,
I'll never be such a liar.
My body is rigid,
I'm full of hate,
For when you leave,
I cannot wait. thats a good poem | |
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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts : 357
Join date : 2009-03-03
Age : 28
Location : Cali baby!!!
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Wed May 05, 2010 6:58 pm | |
| thanx guys!! i appreciate tha lovee!! | |
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Kiera!!!!
Petting Gargoyle
Posts : 357
Join date : 2009-03-03
Age : 28
Location : Cali baby!!!
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Wed May 05, 2010 7:26 pm | |
| Why am I here?
She asks, and He doesn't answer.
Is the end near?
She asks, He still doesn't answer.
Do You truely love just me?
She asks, Yes.
here's a poem i just wrote, it's called Why? | |
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gendeadislove
Phoebe
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Join date : 2010-01-17
Age : 30
Location : places.
| | Subject: Re: Tear Drop...a poem Wed May 19, 2010 4:03 pm | |
| love both the poems!!  ur amazing. dont stop writing!! | |
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