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lexylovedead
Traditionally Biotic
Posts : 5
Join date : 2009-11-26
Age : 28
Location : potage the colors r red,black,and white
 |  Subject: when loves dies: a poem  Fri Nov 27, 2009 12:23 am | |
| when love dies
one may ceise to exsist
others may drift away
some will search to find new love
but it will never be the same
love may never die in the eyes of those
who truly belive there love left and will return
when love dies it may fade it may dissapear
but love will find u where ever you may go
in many different ways [quote]
Last edited by lexylovedead on Fri Nov 27, 2009 12:43 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : i love to write poetry and to write about love dying is preaty cool some of my poems have been put in young poets books which is amazing for me and this poem tells people that once love leaves you another love may find u but it might not always work out) | |
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lexylovedead
Traditionally Biotic
Posts : 5
Join date : 2009-11-26
Age : 28
Location : potage the colors r red,black,and white
| | Subject: what did i do: a poem(not all poems rhyme) Sat Nov 28, 2009 8:33 pm | |
| what did i do to make u leave
to make u cry to make u weep
i never complaind about your cuts
about your anger about your rage
i left to hide to cry to throw away sorrow
with a cut that made me feel alive when you were not
you found me alone by a tree thats like you
and soothed away my pain
its been a year since you died
but the loss of who you were when you were alive is still here when your not
i wish you are here with me in my time of need
but you left with a tear in your eye as if you were allowed to cry
i go to the tree that is like you and ask myself
what did i do to make you leave
to make you cry to make you weep
i wonder if you will ever come back
but it will be to late for me to ever be the same
at the tree thats just like you i will make my last cut
i will be like you and the tree
i will be dead and wait for you to come back
so we can love each other again forever
what if you dont come back will i have made a mistake
to join you and the undead
i will take my chaces for love never dies
Last edited by lexylovedead on Sat Nov 28, 2009 9:08 pm; edited 7 times in total (Reason for editing : love never dies and my poem tells how depressed someone can be for the someone they loved so much that they would end there life and its sort-of romantic in some way as alot of things are but even in the world of the undead there is love) | |
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Keela
Finding out Tommy is on the Football team
Posts : 85
Join date : 2009-08-24
Location : On the baseball field in my Wonderland...la duh! =)
| | Subject: Re: what did i do: a poem(not all poems rhyme) Tue Dec 29, 2009 10:10 pm | |
| You're poem definitely has truth to it. I commend you, not many poets can achieve that. Good job. | |
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Xheart_hope2die
Noticing a Living Impaired w/a short skirt
Posts : 29
Join date : 2009-03-03
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: what did i do: a poem(not all poems rhyme) Fri Jan 01, 2010 5:02 pm | |
| I really like it. I can tell there's a lot of force behind it. | |
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gendeadislove
Phoebe
Posts : 2096
Join date : 2010-01-17
Age : 30
Location : places.
| | Subject: Re: what did i do: a poem(not all poems rhyme) Thu Feb 11, 2010 9:00 am | |
| this is an amazing poem. i really wish i could write poetry. ive tried, but nohing ever seems to work. oh well, i guess i should just stick to writing my gen dead fanfiction. keep up writing. ur really great. | |
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Xheart_hope2die
Noticing a Living Impaired w/a short skirt
Posts : 29
Join date : 2009-03-03
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: what did i do: a poem(not all poems rhyme) Sun Feb 21, 2010 10:31 am | |
| - gendeadislove wrote:
- this is an amazing poem. i really wish i could write poetry. ive tried, but nohing ever seems to work. oh well, i guess i should just stick to writing my gen dead fanfiction. keep up writing. ur really great.
you said that in another forum too, are you trying to get people to tell you that you should post some poetry??? cause you can just say that. | |
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gendeadislove
Phoebe
Posts : 2096
Join date : 2010-01-17
Age : 30
Location : places.
| | Subject: Re: what did i do: a poem(not all poems rhyme) Sun Feb 21, 2010 10:32 am | |
| no im not trying for that. | |
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lilyxlove
Listening to Margie Gab
Posts : 51
Join date : 2010-04-17
Age : 30
| | Subject: Re: what did i do: a poem(not all poems rhyme) Thu Apr 22, 2010 1:51 pm | |
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