a poem by me! "I love you..." (Warning: No rhymes)

When
you smile,

I
brighten up.

When
you laugh,

I
turn as bright as the sun.

When
you walk,

I
just watch.

When
you breathe,

I
can’t help but stare.

When
you talk to me,

I get
butterflies.

When
you look into my eyes,

I
swear I lose my train of thought.

When
you walk by me,

I
take in your scent.

When
you are sarcastic,

I
can’t help but to laugh.

When
you say you love me,

It
just reminds me.

Of
all the reasons,

Why I
love you.

I really like it. It's sweet.
And the no rhyming thing makes it unique.
Good job.

Kudos ^_^ I too like it. Smile

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