Keela Finding out Tommy is on the Football team
Posts : 85 Join date : 2009-08-24 Location : On the baseball field in my Wonderland...la duh! =)
| Subject: Hey, here's a poem I wrote for my English class. I felt like postin, so read plz. Tue Dec 15, 2009 7:19 pm | |
| The Realms of Old A door made of light Holds a magic of great might. A dark mysterious wood Conceals ghosts of those once good. These are the magical realms of old One is comforting, One is cold. | |
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Xheart_hope2die Noticing a Living Impaired w/a short skirt
Posts : 29 Join date : 2009-03-03 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Hey, here's a poem I wrote for my English class. I felt like postin, so read plz. Tue Dec 22, 2009 3:12 pm | |
| I really love that second stanza. "A dark mysterious wood Conceals ghosts of those once good." that's really really good. go off of that and make it longer, I think it would be awesome-er!
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Keela Finding out Tommy is on the Football team
Posts : 85 Join date : 2009-08-24 Location : On the baseball field in my Wonderland...la duh! =)
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| Subject: Re: Hey, here's a poem I wrote for my English class. I felt like postin, so read plz. | |
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