The Cabin.

Subject: Waste Of Breath Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:35 pm

Waste of Breath 4/5

Long and Forgotten

Uninteresting and
dull

My time was there and
gone

And now I'm all but
dust

Did I do something
wrong

Or am I just a waste
of breath

I used to have
meaning

Now I feel as if I'm
nothing.

Long and forgotten

Old and Dull

My time was here and
gone

And now I'm useless

I'm sorry I don’t
live close

Or understand you
workings

I'm sorry I'm not
there

Whenever there around

You used to be my
world

Everything was so
bright

Anytime you cried

You turned out all
the lights

I wanted to give you

Everything I had

But what do you give
a girl

Who has everything

I’ve wasted my breath

Telling everything
true

Your beautiful and
smart

Yeah he thinks so too

He came and told you
truths

The same truths I’ve
told forever

His words meant more
than mine

…and now I'm all but
dust

there might be...there probably is spelling errors.

What cha think?

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:35 pm

It broke it up like that not me. Sorry guys.

Subject: The Cabin. Tue Apr 20, 2010 8:36 pm

Cabin

Abroad his white
horse, I sit with ye

We are traveling to
the purest sea

This is where we
shall stay

We shall remain here
day after day

For I'm with you,
that’s all I need

To the cabin, with
the pond, the frogs, and the reed

This is where our cherished
thoughts will be

You’ll collect the
wood, start the fire and we’ll drink our tea

We’ll lye together
and I’ll depart

And dream of ye with
all my heart

I’ll awake with the
morning snow

On the porch you
stand aglow

I walk towards you
and place a kiss

And forever my dear,
we’ll remain

In bliss

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Fri Apr 23, 2010 5:45 pm

this is really good.

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Fri Apr 23, 2010 5:47 pm

this one is also really good. i think i may like this one better tho.

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Fri Apr 23, 2010 6:18 pm

Awwwwwwwwwwwww thank you!!!!

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Fri Apr 23, 2010 6:59 pm

Why thank you ^-^

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Fri Apr 23, 2010 7:08 pm

you are very welcome!!

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Fri Apr 23, 2010 7:09 pm

you are quite welcome

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Fri Apr 23, 2010 7:40 pm

wow...

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:07 am

What? Is wow good?

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Sat Apr 24, 2010 7:54 pm

i think so

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Sat Apr 24, 2010 8:19 pm

Why thank you ^-^

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:22 am

Yes, wow is good. Sorry I didn't respond to that faster. But its just that I can't rhyme and make it sound good and this is really good.

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:07 pm

Why thank you Smile

Means a lot!

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Sun Apr 25, 2010 1:39 pm

No problem and take it from someone who cares, don't stop writing.

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:40 pm

Gen. is right. This is more than good.

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:29 pm

Awww, that's very nice.
It's cool to hear other people say that kinda stuff.

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Sun Apr 25, 2010 4:32 pm

Thank you guys <3 That really means a lot <3

The person who this is about read it and was like "Awww."
It's not suppose to be an Awww poem.

Did you guys get that?

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Sun Apr 25, 2010 6:35 pm

Well its the truth.

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Tue Apr 27, 2010 4:41 pm

i got that.

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Tue Apr 27, 2010 4:46 pm

you are much better than i am with poetry. i am really not too great. i still dont know where my ode to tak came from

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Tue Apr 27, 2010 9:13 pm

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Tue Apr 27, 2010 9:14 pm

You are very good. don't down yourself silly

Subject: Re: The Cabin. Wed Apr 28, 2010 12:41 pm